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song / poem / thing :)
Replies: 2Last Post Oct. 11 9:19am by note to self
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( killabyte )

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ok il already poasted this a few days back but tell
me what u think and if u can make some edits to it  please tyvm

u live ur life then u die and ppl cry
as u fly like an angel up into the sky
then ppl stand round just watching u lie
so lifeless inside in all of ur pride
its that trrrible feeling wen sombody dies
its that one time in life when everyone crys
did ur life have meaning b4 u died
or did u have no fukin pride

nobody knows if theres life after this
you just hope wen u go that you will be missed
theres that girl in the carpark u shouldnt of kissed
but when u sit back and think up all of this shit
u realise inside that it meens alot less
some ppl have died and they have been missed
u died tonight because u lifted ur fist

ppl come n go all the time its a crime that
some ppl ovr step the line n wine n
wen u buy somethin fine its mine but
u never think of the crime n time spent sufferin

it takes time to make all these stupid things
that we tend to buy without thinkin
about the guys on production lines makin them
workin 4 a wage not worth takin

so give a lil thought to what u got n who made it
cuz u never know when ul be without it  
and u never really knew that much about it


so give a lil more than u take
maybe that way therel b more at ur wake
just give a lil more than u take
and try not to make this mistake
cuz i did


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killabyte

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another day
another braincell wasted


9:04 am on Oct. 11, 2008 | Joined Dec. 2007 | 34 Days Active
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devilcurls6981


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dude good songs, always have all the words spelled out.

9:12 am on Oct. 11, 2008 | Joined June 2008 | 126 Days Active
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note to self


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i don't like that is rhymes so much

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athletes lift weights
cheerleaders lift athletes

9:19 am on Oct. 11, 2008 | Joined Dec. 2006 | 131 Days Active
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